sami
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Mason
Jul 6, 2010 12:24:26 GMT -7
Post by sami on Jul 6, 2010 12:24:26 GMT -7
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xXGeneralXx [/b] Name::Mason Nickname::None Gender::Male Pack::loner Rank::None Mate::Looking Pups::None [/blockquote] xXColorsXx [/center][/size] Eye Color::My eye color is Yellow Undercoat Color::White Outercoat Color::Grey and brownCoat Color Description::I have a fluffy grey and brown coat. With a touch of red here and there. My tail is just grey with a touch of white. Around my face is a light brown. My fur is fluffy and smooth. [/size][/blockquote] xXPersonalityXx Nice or Mean::Nice Personality Description::I am very shy and don't say much but I'm very happy. I know how to protect. If anyone threatened me or anyone around me I will turn into a monster. [/size] xXHistoryXx Mother::Abby [/b] Father::Tom Siblings::Unknown History Description::My life was a small normal life. I played with my siblings. And i enjoyed being with my family. but about 3 months ago i thought it was time for me to go on my own. My parents were thinking the same thing. So i would have gotten kick out anyway. i have been a loner for a little bit now. [/size][/blockquote][/color]
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Mason
Jul 6, 2010 13:08:01 GMT -7
Post by Kikiara on Jul 6, 2010 13:08:01 GMT -7
This is pretty good. All I suggest is that you work on is using capitols. You did really good with that but you need to remember to use capitol I's.
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